ManOfTriforce's Reviews

[Happy Ninja Day]

Ninjas are teh l337

Have the music start when the movie plays, not when it loads, so that it syncs up with the rest of the movie. Aside from that, awesome. Like...Ninja Gear Awesome. :D

If you do have time, maybe you could add more details to backgrounds or something. I wouldn't know because my school doesn't have classes like that so I don't know how hard they grade.

Shadow-Hyren responds:

The other people in my class are total failures when it comes to anything technologic, so when put into comparison with their stuff, mine looks really good XD

[O.N.E.]

Beautiful and smooth!

First off I'm Korean so perhaps it makes me a bit biased, heheh. But this is truly amazingly, awesomely, outstanding flash work! The 3D art is so flowing and looks so polished it's almost par with Pixar animations!

And I loved Arirang. Best song ever! Music is indeed the universal language.

[Inner Light L.N. Trailer]

Excellent!

Actually the only reason I'm reviewing is because my ears picked up your music selection. I believe it was the Phoenix theme from X-MEN 3, was it not?

And then I realized that what I got from that trailer, it did actually seem somewhat parallel to X-Men in some ways. I looks great and I'm going to go watch the ...two parts that are already out?

I can't wait to see more work from you :D

[Avoid the Matrix]

Great job.

That was a very fun game. I hope you make new games to improve upon it, like sound or something. Other than that, great job.

[My Health Project]

A very good flash quiz.

That was very entertaining, educating, and ...entertaining. I never knew peanuts were found in the meat section . Good job :P

The graphics were amazing since all you used was Mac. Flash MX.
The music was good and it helped give life to the quiz and not make it all dull.
The whole thing is about interactivity with the buttons and all heh...

Again, good job!

[Heresy and Witchcraft]

Well done for 2 hours.

I would say that was definately an evil sounding piece, heheh. And for 2 hours, it's pretty well done. Now, on to understanding the ratings I gave:

Keep in mind I'm generally quite stingy with the ratings.

Because I haven't heard that much classical which follows the dark theme you built your piece around, I would give it a 6. I have heard scary songs before in classical. The beginning seemed to have a more dark ambient feel to it. Bah what do I know.

I've given low on diversity because really there wasn't much diversity in the melodies that I heard. There was some, but not much. Then again, it is hard to create diversity in a song like this but it is not impossible. I suppose it would account for the limitations of 2 hours, heh?

It wasn't the clearest piece I've heard but maybe it was supposed to be that way? I don't know.

2 hours is definately reflected, not in a bad way!! In most ways, that is. But it seems polished enough to be enjoyable to those who like the overall mood of it.

Good luck on future pieces! *gets off the stage before further making a fool of myself*

Slaugther-Me1 responds:

Thank you very much for your review :)

You are right about everything, (except the -effort- those were some really 2 stressfull hours you know :p )

I will shortly rework the piece (do some mastering better mixing, add some stuff) because I am not entirely happy with the result as well. I 'll re-upload it, till then...

Thanks again